Showing posts with label concrete poetry. Show all posts
Showing posts with label concrete poetry. Show all posts

Saturday, 1 April 2023

2023.1 Shazam

Taking a nudge from the Allographic prompt today, starting with an Abracadabra:

Sometimes joy and labour are reversed, it’s true.
No matter how you try, the truth comes out.
High and dry, I find that I’ve no choice:
my options dwindle, one by one;
this sandbar looks like ending.
When did I fear wet feet?
I might get over
my head but, well,
there may be
no real
choice

A watercolour painting of a dark brown, wooden rowing boat pulled up in the shallows of a tropical-looking beach just under a cluster of three palm trees. The sun is bright, but storm clouds are massing, and there is nothing else in sight, just the sea, beach, trees, and sky.
Image found via the Know Your Phrase article about the phrase "high and dry"

[Image description: a watercolour painting of a dark brown, wooden rowing boat pulled up in the shallows of a tropical-looking beach just under a cluster of three palm trees. The sun is bright, but storm clouds are massing, and there is nothing else in sight, just the sea, beach, trees, and sky. End image description.]


Tuesday, 12 April 2022

2022.9 Tenebrae

A #Mothra, courtesy of Beth Hartley, via Poetry Non-Stop’s prompt for the day (inspired by an image from StormHour):

There
is a
beauty in contrasts:
opposites propping each other
up, providing a backdrop, swapping
light for dark, and vice versa,
all the while building to a crescendo,
dipping in and out, weaving a foundation for
loud that only works because the quiet came first.
And now that sudden hush as reality creaks, waiting, breath
held, for the cloudburst, the ecstasy of finally just letting go...

And oh, the relief, as all the loud and bright and
dark, soft and jagged, haggard and hopeful, tangle, the way
they’ve been waiting to, the way they were made
to take up space, even if just for
this one moment, this breathing, heaving respite
from holding still, from tamping down.
from that difficult frown of
hiding from the neighbours.
No matter now.
Just breathe.
There.

Photograph of a sunset sky from a high vantage point over a large plain. The sky boils with dark, layered clouds, side-lit by the sunset. One huge swag of cloud seems to have been ripped from the main bank and is flowing raggedly down to touch the ground. It's all incredibly dramatic!
Image: Shower Over Jodrell Bank by Mark Boardman, via StormHour


I find Mothras difficult, it turns out, because my brain has mastered syllable counting at a pretty much unconscious level these days, but word-counting doesn’t fit my rhythmic nature! Or something. Anyway, it was nice to give this a go. Why not try it on yourself via the ever-present Concrete and Repeating Poetry Forms Spreadsheet?

(It was also very pleasing to discover the multiple meanings of tenebrae...)



Tuesday, 5 April 2022

2022.5 Unsung

Somewhat inspired by yesterday’s Poetry Non-Stop prompt by Linda Collins, this turned out quite concrete:

Centre-aligned so that it looks a little like an hourglass are the words of the poem shown below the graphic; they then reverse line by line, still legible, though grey and wiggly in the manner of rippling water

It’s my first time trying this kind of poem; I thought I’d start small this first time, and yes – enlisted the help of my trusty spreadsheet to keep me in check (so now you can too). Text below:

I appear to be
all whys and hows, not what
an act of translation should be:
dappled in the wisdom
of other tongues lapping,
the invisible ripples
you might feel;
I cannot tell
what


Monday, 26 April 2021

2021.15 Mainline

It’s not exactly the best idea –
ambling along while they all run.
Maybe you thought it helped:
resting, assuming you could ski
uphill, floating on momentum.
Never mind the discipline won,
never mind the camaraderie too:
intimacy forged by common fight.
Not for you the questing bonds,
glued to the notion that you?
Better off aloof, hiding the bitter
equations of effort spent on those
hampering your flow… somehow.
It’s not even as though
nobody notices, you lovely
dolt; count the actual thanks and crack on…

Catching up, catching up…!

What appears to be a photo of the beginning of a two-lane, white-painted race track on terracotta, sandy soil. A tortoise is poised in one position, a hare in the other, both animals with their forefeet on the starting line. Behind each creature are their distinctive footprints in the sand. It's possible to interpret the positions of their heads as them eyeing each other. The quality of reddish light and the position of their long shadows further implies that this is sunset. Or possibly sunrise - I'm no expert!
This result from searching for The Tortoise and the Hare turns up all over Google but I can't find the origin, so can't credit the creator, sadly. Mine came from, of all places, Craft Brews and Running Shoes


Sunday, 4 April 2021

2021.3 Eoster

It isn’t quite a year yet, though the day shouts,
unheeding joy bellowing in colours
picturebook bright, obscenely clamorous;
the careless yellow, purple, bronze,
and green, green, green of it all.
Birdsong beckons, clouds dance;
the wind and sunlight
gently caress
the chasm
between
us.


This is a form known as the Abracadabra, which was Day 4's prompt and I promptly went all emo on it. The form does suit emo, though. And I'm going to blame it on being ill. So there. And I used the Repeating Poetry Form tool to keep me in line.

A close-up picture of a spray of lilacs which grow in clumps of small, four-petalled flowers, pinkish-purple with a white border to each petal. Blurred in the background are more lilac sprays and greenness
Image of lilacs from FTD.com


Monday, 22 April 2019

2019.11 Dies Forte

Vent away, she says with a smile.
Eventually, I respond, it won’t be
Necessary. We ponder in silence.
Generally, she suggests,
Everyone needs some kind of release.
Anger isn’t always a weakness.
Nevertheless, I say. It’s firm, soothed with a tiny smile.
Carefully, we negotiate each shift of topic;
Echoing throughout: our shared agenda,
Itching to be heard, made real,
Surging tide beneath our keels.
Long silences are loqacious here and now.
I pause yet again, reach to touch her hand.
Victory is in the little things.
Impishly, she all-but grins,
Nods.
Gathering ourselves, we rise on cue,
Wander out into the sunshine,
Exiting a chapter that didn’t give us much to say.
Lost in the dazzle for a moment, she tips her head back,
Laughter arcing into free air.