Wednesday, 15 April 2026

14 - Count Down

#NaPoWriMo Day 14 and today I’ve written an Abracadabra inspired by the Random Line Generator. The words I was given were clean, taunt, inspect, secret, guard, thick, brush, and vapour, and it’s quite the challenge to fit them into such an already curtailed form. Judge for yourself how you think I did!

Remember that, if you’re a subscriber to my Patreon, you can hear a recording of this piece (and the thirteen preceding it) there. The link to the relevant post is here: https://www.patreon.com/posts/count-down-155651088


“Is it clean yet?” the old man taunts. “Come on, boy!
“He wants to see your face in it, come night.”
The young lad shakes his head and brushes
thick detritus of an age free.
Intent to pass inspection,
he fails to keep his guard.
The secret hour strikes;
he sees nothing
as vapours
claim his
life
A gothic looking mirror with a very ornate, dark red frame, all curlicues and snarling heads, complete with candlestick holders at the bottom. The wall behind the mirror is a slightly lighter shade of red, but with odd patterns of light grey, almost like dried salt water marks, or even some kind of regular-yet-chaotic mould. The glass of the mirror is the next shade of dark red from black, and it looks as though the colour is seeping out and coagulating on the lower lip of the frame. So faint as to be possibly a figment of your imagination, are two faint handprints to either side of the bottom of the glass. If it is glass. It's probably glass. I'm sure it's fine.
Original mirror image obtained from Wikipedia, then thoroughly messed with by me

If you’d like to write your own Abracadabra, why not make use of my handy-dandy shareware spreadsheet that can help get you started? https://bit.ly/poemrep

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